Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts

Thursday, September 25, 2014

Storytelling Week 6: On a Walk in the Park



Park

 Jayden was a curious child. He was very curious indeed. He spent his days exploring the world, studying all of the bugs and leaves and cracks in the sidewalks. The world was just so big and complex. He loved it.

Every day he asked his father and mother and teacher and grandmother and friends and mailman and strangers walking down the street “Why?”

“Why are some plants green and some not?”

“Why do people wear shoes?”

“Why don’t dogs talk like us?”

One day when he was walking through the park with his mother he looked up at the sky. He stopped on the sidewalk and just stood there looking. He looked for a whole five minutes before he finally asked, “Mother, why do clouds fly? Why are they up there? Why don’t they ever come down? You never see a cloud on the ground. Why?”

His mother thought for a moment. “Well, dear,” she said, “a very, very long time ago, before you or I were born, mountains had wings. They flew gracefully through the air. All of the people admired their beauty while they were in the air, but, like all things that fly, sometimes they would get tired and land.

“When they landed, they didn’t look where. They would crush people and animals and trees. They would crush whole cities!

“Now the gods saw this and were unhappy. The lives they were looking out for kept getting crushed. The Lord of Heaven took his lightning bolts and threw them down at the mountains to cut off their wings. He cut off all of the mountains’ wings except for one. That mountain flew away and hid in the ocean, but never comes out for fear that he will lose his wings, too.

“All of the wings from the mountains flew up into the sky and stayed there. Now they fly around up there wherever they please, but they’re too light to come back down to earth on their own. Those wings are what we call clouds.”

“Oh,” said Jayden. “If the only reason they don’t come down to earth is that they’re too light, why won’t anyone help them?”

His mother wasn’t quite prepared for that question, so she answered, “well, people are afraid that if the clouds come down to earth, they’ll join the mountains again and they will fly around carelessly crushing whatever they land on again.”

“Oh,” said Jayden, “okay.”

And they continued their walk through the park.

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Author's Note:  This story is based on a story in William Buck's 1976 version of the Ramayana on page 226. I really wanted to paint a realistic picture of a realistic child having a conversation with a parent. The parent in this case isn't being too honest with the child, but parents lie to their kids about all kinds of things (Santa, the Tooth Fairy, where babies come from, etc.).

Wednesday, September 24, 2014

Week 6 Reading Diary B



A group went before the army and levelled the path
Samudra has a wide soul—it says so twice
This was written at a time when people believed in everything being comprised of the four elements? One of their elements seems different—light instead of fire
How did they repair all of the damage from the fire in about a week’s time?
“The superior person will gladly take good advice before acting”—Ravana, page 278, right before he ignores his Vibhishana
“sneak-thief” is such a great insult, page 279
“Do you think I’ll stop and change my ways though the whole world says I’m wrong?”—Ravana page 279, before saying that Vibhishana is just envious of the throne
“I’ll pay you back some day”—Vibhishana to Rama page 281
Sarana was never seen by anyone again after he disappeared when he was caught
Ravana refused Sarana’s knowledge when he returned and resigned
“[Sita] quietly opened her hand, and let life slip and fall away through her fingers.” Page 286 after Ravana shows her Rama’s severed head
Kumbhakarna tells Ravana to give Sita back, R. says it’s not his fault she’s so beautiful but she won’t sleep with him
“What I don’t like I don’t hear”—Ravana page 300, very characteristic
Vibhishana has loyalties to both sides
Rama’s army abandoned him when Kumbhakarna came
Hanuman took a bite out of K.’s ear
How did K. know about Rama shooting Vali in the back?
“This sad peril is all my fault. I have banished Vibhishana who was my conscience, and my young brother who loved me is dead”—Ravana page 307
Ravana has mood swings
“All is Dharma”—Indrajit page 318
Ravana tries to kill Sita, but  Suka stops him saying, “Majesty, do not draw the sword of an Empire to kill a woman, or else you let anger lead you into shame!” page 324 and Ravana actually listens to him

Monday, September 22, 2014

Week 6 Reading Diary A



Another vulture tried to fight Ravana when he took Sita, but R. conceded and V. wouldn’t fight someone who surrendered
The monkeys and bears say they can jump 100 leagues, but they can’t get back; if they can jump that far one way, why not the other?
Hanuman didn’t ask to go to Lanka, but agreed to when he was pointed out
Mountains had wings. Those wings are now clouds
You can hold on to a shadow and it will have a similar effect as holding on to the person
Demons have a large range of appearances
A mantra is a thing that can be worn? I thought it was a chant thing
People still thought the earth was flat when this was written
Sita changed a lot in captivity, looked worn out and disappointed, was still beautiful
Who is Kalee?
Hanuman is preparing to fight the Rakshasis—does he think he can win? Is he not turned away by the fact that they’re women? does he even consider them to be women?
Hanuman has a very “act now, think later” personality
Trijata’s dream is full of white except for Ravana, who wore red, then was dragged to the Land of Death
Sita says she will save the Rakshasis when Rama defeats Ravana
“Ravana had the patience and strength to protect all Creation from harm, but he did just the opposite and took the worlds for his possessions” pg 258
“Any kind of evil can be easily done in thoughtless anger”—Hanuman, thinking he’d burned Sita
Hanuman told Rama that Sita said things that she didn’t; things that were more insulting than what she did say